Awww. This was a very beautiful poem about love. You had a great flow and wonderful imagery. I could actually feel the emotions that you were trying to portray when I was reading this poem and to me that makes any poem great! :) You're an amazing writer! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Mou, so sweet. You convey your emotions so well, and so easily that it's just impossible to not love this poem. Fantastic work, 5 from me!
Also, thank you so much for the lovely comment! ^^

I liked that, especially the first stanza.
Outstanding beginning, with a great ending. :]
The rhyming was fine, didn't seem forced or anything.
The flow was great!! WhootWhoot.
The emotion, I loved. :]

5/5.
God Bless You, too.

This poem has a beautiful meaning into it, and as i was reading it, i was pretanding that someone is talling to me.... that way i found a great meaning into it, which is knowing and feeling ppl around us, who loves us? who truly wants us?
reading this poem you have taken me into a world of thinking, thinking about ok i have wrote alot about how someone has deceves me in love, but let me think if in anyway i have not relized someone around me, who might have love me...........
i give u a 5/5 for this wonderful poem, really well written by a talented poet.

This is a typical teenage I love you and I hope you love me too poem. It was ok as they go, but ok is really the limits of this subject. The use of rhyme was good, no sign of it being forced. In the third stanza the used of "sorriness" seems clumsy. Also in places the wording could be better for example on the second line of the last stanza it should be " heart of solid gold."
Not a bad poem overall, keep writing and keep improving.

I really liked the idea to this one... but there were some rough patches... like the flow in some spots was a bit bumpy, and there were some lines i just didnt get. but overall, i thought the idea was very well carried through, and with a few tweaks this could be something good.

Wow. . . that was an amazing poem . . . great job

Aw this was a very nice poem! I really enjoyed reading this Good job!