This is my fav out of all of the 1s of urs i have read!!!
hehe im trying to figure out which is my fav stanza but ive given up becoz i luv them all

Wow thats very good that really hits you at the end "but on the outside remains uncracked" so he doesn't show his pain to the world, just bottles it all up inside keepum commin awsome poem sweetie

Thats good you leave me speachless with every poem i read.

Wow. Your poetry brings tears to my eyes. No one should have to live like that and I really hope that child wasn't you. I loved the last stanza. Keep writing.=]

Pip xxx

Love it, love it love it.
It raises attention to one of the many mostly unspoken things in our society.
A joy to read.

When poetry is as filled with passion as yours, i look past grammer & spelling crap. this one embodies such resilience. it's very sad, but like your others it contains triumph. you must be an optimist. i also hope this wasn't you! if it was, i'd say you've done well! a thousand thanks for your comments! you rock. 5 (of course)! -beav

This poem is so amazing you captured each word and each word fit in perfect place

it was a pleasure to read this one great job!!!

5/5
laura

Good poem

This is amazing, it has a wonderful flow, I Just love it.

5/5

Jessie

This is really powerful ! you portrayed what really happens out there..
good job.. !