Very cute poem. Great job. Here's some things:
"your" should be you're. you could also add more imagery
Keep it up!

Awwwwwwwwww
this poem was so adorable,
"And how it would suck
If life hadn't brought you"
that was my favorite line, it was so cute. i wish someone would read me this poem, you should read it to the girl you like =))
5;5

You misspelled because