I loved this poem, it flowed well and it was quite inspirational because its true, heartaches do happen in life but you have to keep going...well done xx

First off, thanks for the VERY nice comment! I like your last line, not because it is profound, but because it needs to be said. I have a poem called Cutting Your Life, you may like. I like your style of rhyming poetry...rare to find believe it or not! Good job.
Charisma*

I love it:) it flows very well. once i started to read it i just could stop reading till the end of the poem:)

Oh wow..that is the most amazing thing I've ever read. I love how you make a pattern with your writing, like the keep living and just keep writing and stuff..Your so amazingly talented