That's very sad. Almost all of my friends are going through the same thing. Hope you'll feel better.

*You may want to recheck your spelling, some words need a '.

Good job. The ending was a little rocky but it was good overall. It made me sad. I have been in that situation before and I hated it. Good luck and nice job. =]

>black&&blue

Omg i love all your work your so good, i wish i was like u

That's sad.
Something I can relate to. I use to love a guy but he was in love with someone else and it broke my heart in the end and I'm still picking up the pieces.
Wonderful flow and great emotions portrayed in this one! 5/5

Stephanie

Awwwwh.
This was sad but also sweet at the same time, because your love was there for everyone to see.
I really enjoyed this, I think you did a good job.