Hey, i really like this poem n think u should finish it. i can relate to it...
its really good.

No one seems to here my pleads

should be; "No one seems to hear my pleads"

if you make it ryhme, that would be greater than great, than you ever imagine, but, perhaps you want to write them as free verse, oh.. i don't know, anyway, keep them coming, have a great day, take care!

I really like this poem its one of my favorite ones my favorite part it 'but my heart still craves for that feeling of love, and for someone to notice me' because thats how i feel all the time its so a 5.0 but you could all more to the end

Dear Letty,
truly i have luved this poem like ur all other poem, great job once again my dear friend Letty........

5/5

I like the idea behind it, but i've found that adding a few words here and there might make it a lil better: (heres some examples-- the words in caps are the words i added)

stanza 3:
No one seems to here my pleads
or notices my sorry state.
Reaching out to them, I have tried, but my hand they just won't
take.
(i removed the word "before" in line 4, because it sounds better w/o it)

stanza 5:
I'm miserable and dying inside.
Am I not good enough to save?
Is it my destiny to never live, but TO die?
(i removed "on the" in line 1)

last stanza:
My mind is constantly trying to persuade
me to JUST let it go, and let it be.
But my heart still craves for that feeling of love,
and for someone to JUST notice me.
(i thoguht the adding of the word just made it more powerful)

you dont have to change anything, im jsut giving some advice from a reader. great job, nonetheless.

5/5. I think it looks good the way it is. It's very emotional and very discriptive and very much can relate to others. I think you did a great job. Keep it up!

I think that this is a great poem. Please do finish it. I believe that it is worth it. It has a great flow and great word choice. Keep up the good work.

If there is ever a poem you would like me to read just ask:)

Nice poem hun but bit sad again. anyway i love this poem.

Suda

You shouldn't ever stop a poem but you did an amazing job && you should keep writing this because it's amazing && your very talented.

keep it up. keep on writing. Love always && forever.

I REALLY LOVE THIS ONE! PLEASE continue. I'll feel like a piece of ME is missing, if you don't! lol. I have to agree with Shadowspoet that it'd be cool if it rhymed more, but what you already have is amazing. I think I really connected with this piece. GOING ON MY FAVORITE POEMS! :) We haven't talked in a while, but <3 ya, Letty!
PV
P.S. Let me know if/when you get a second part done!