Comments : My promise to you

  • 17 years ago

    by Allisha

    This is really good. It's a beautiful poem. You have talent. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I'll always Be natural
    like a sprouting sunflower seed,
    I'll always feel this love for you
    Because you are all i need

    This was a beautiful verse to convey your feelings that you will always be there. I have such trouble explaining feelings of love and this was amazing.
    Natural it should be. Awesome Job.
    Dixie

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awh this was sweet:] i really liked it. keep up the good work!