Comments : One More Day

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Great flow and great meaning nice job bro 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Awwwh how sweet! great job!!!! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha

    You seem like a nice guy, but you see you're already in love with somebody else

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw this is sad, but very beautiful i loved it, and thanks for your constructive criticism on mine, :) good to hear from ya, take care, xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful love poem It really touched my heart. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful love poem It really touched my heart. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Good write zach nicely penned.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very nicely written...could feel the strong passion

    all the best and take care