Aww.. this is such a sweet and heartfelt poem. It is filled with so much emotion and honesty. The flow was really good and held up well throughout the poem. It was very sweet with beautiful descriptions. Great job on this! 5/5

I really enjoyed ur poem i thought it was really sweet, and i loved it and love how u wrote it, its a top job!

Interesting... First stanza is my favorite one. I don't prefer love poetry but you wrote this piece greatly. 5/5