Nice poem, i think we're all victoms of love in one way or another...

I love it!! hehe

It was a very emotional poem and one of the better ones written on love. Thank you for your comment...it was very nice!
Charisma*

So true..going through it

That is good. i really know how to express yourself

You have some very good poems also and when I write poems or songs its the only way I can express myself. People have so much they deal with in thier life and its nice just to let it all out and write it as a song or a poem and then you can share it with other ppl that have similar problems...keep up the good work on your poems....

Brilliant ending, it summed it all up prefectly.
And your rhyme scheme had no flaws as far as i can tell. It flowed excellently!
Keep writing! Your work is great!
5/5
*Gem*

This is an amazing write! beautiful flow, i loved it, keep it up! thanks for your comment on my poem

Love this one :) and its soo true too :((

This is good keep it up!!!

Oh my god i love this poem its beautiful keep writting

Oh my god i love this poem its beautiful keep writting

Oh my god i love this poem its beautiful keep writting

I loved this.
My favourite part was

left me for dead in heartbreak town
a place much worse then hell

I thought you described a broken heart perfectly with that.

This is another favourite.

Word-choice and imagery was good.

Just a few improvements and adjustments.........

I think you should have made the 1st and 3rd lines in the first stanza rhyme. All the other stanzas rhyme so why not that one? Also i dont like the last lines, i think you could have ended the poem differently. 4/5

~kayla~

Oh man, this one is definitely true. I am a victim right now. I've been a victim all my life. Even when it seems to be working out, one small slip, and it ends. Then you go back to being the victim. Oh man.. good stuff.. lol

"I now know love's not a friend
But the devil in disguise
A friend I do not recommend
But one I do despise"

I love that stanza!!!
Great read!
5/5

marcella

Wow another great poem that i can relate to
"love is something that burns with passion but if your not careful you can get burned" this is a great piece

laura

Good
reminds me of a song i heard a long time ago
Heartbreak hotel
5/5

Good poem