This is very good jenna, 5/5!!! love the cjoice of words, keep it up!!!

Bryan,

Great work! loved the detailing and use of words. it was really good...painted a good picture. 5/5

Awesome poem!
I love the form it's written in and I also like the wording and imagery.
You're pretty good at writing poems with a specific form - good work!
5/5

Good poem jenna. i love you sweety.
and im always here for you never forget that.

What a twist
I have to admit i find parquetts very difficult to write. To date, i have only completed one of about eight attempts
But you make it look easy.
I didn't see the ending coming, when you mentioned the mirror however it all made sense.
It's sad how people can make enemies of themselves and it's sad to think that so many people can relate to this. Once upon a time, me included.
You did a wonderful job portraying the emotions throughout this poem about how people feel and how they manage to do this to themselves.. and how easy it is.
However, i think i'm just rambling now. But this is easily one of my favourite poems from you.
You deserve the 5/5
*Gem*