OMG... i LOVED THISS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
absolutely breath-taking..
i havent commented anyone in ages, so forgive me if i didnt point out some stuff..

well, first of all ur rhyme scheme is awesome and ur flow is flawless.. metaphors and abstract images reli intrigue me and amuse me a lot, so i was totally captivated by this piece..

not too long, but not too short either, which suits readers of both preference, esp since im more into shorter, deeper poems these days :D

loooved how u tied all ur lines with each other, and the emotion conveyed throughout the whole poem was amazing!!

i esp. loved the last two lines.. that just blew my mind, honestly..

"Do halos die without Heavenly faiths."
this line spoke the most to me.. reli stood out and in some sense it touched me

GR8 JOB!!
thnx a lot for ur comment
sorry this came sooo late, ive been busy with school

keep on rolling :D
take care
NannO

Hmm...wonderful once again...but I had tog o with a 4. I loved it...just...it was...weird. *shrugs* my mind is yet a weird place and not for those inexperienced. XD
4/5

~*Katie*~

I liked this. I could never write a sonnet this good, I cannot stand structure.