Comments : The cycle

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "As then the rain begins to fall,
    and turns the snow to mush,
    the wind begins to blow,
    people go home in a rush."

    hehe, i liked that stanza. Mushy snow, nice image ;)
    But great nature poem hun, i find it a hard subject to write about but you did excellently!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is a great poem about nature it is sometimes hard to write about but u did it very wel 5/5