Wow, now that was good.

Very unique subject to write a poem about. The flow and rhyming was practically perfect. I really loved this. Good work.

Wow.. I loved the way that you kind of twisted this around to where the murderer was the hero. Very creative. You did an amazing job at writing this. The flow and rhythm was very good and you had great descriptions of everything. It made it easy to imagine. Great job on this! 5/5

Wow, is this a play on that broadway show?
Of course i only know that cos of a Simpsons episode =P
But seriously. This poem was excellent.
Managing to gain sympathy for the one who commited the crime is a difficult thing to get someone to do
(i'm sure i could have phrased that better =/ lol)
5/5
*Gem*

Oooh, I really liked this. It was passionate and the way you used their names made it more personal. The rhymes weren't brilliant but they were still good. Nicely done cyber hubby! 5/5

Amazing, it made think. GR8 job:)

GREAT POEM,
peacefully,there is nothing more anyone can give,, really hits home,
I liked the poem and seen this REALLY happen,,,tragic abuse .....
We have no right to take a life
Except to defend our country,self and loved ones.. There is a fine line between murder and justice.5

Very good poem. Easy to read and has good details and a good flow. 5/5

I like it, i really do but I think it could use a better ending. I like how you tell a story and try to keep it in a poetic form. It could use a little work in my opinion, but i like how you rhymed. I say 4/5

Interesting poem. But a fitting title I think. Nicely written.

Very powerful! the last 2 vers' really hit hime!
Well done.

Awesome poem

Very unique perspective. Very thought provoking...well written D!

This is impressive.
I really enjoyed this piece.

Wow, definitely different. I've never read anything like this. Very creative!

It reads very well, and definitely tells a story. The flow is pretty good, though off in a few places.

Overall it was a good read. Very, very unique.

Beautiful........

Wow, I love it.. You have a way with words, I could see the images play through in my mind while reading your poem. I love it 5/5.

Cuteeee...

Great poem keep up the good work

Hi Darien!
I think that this was a wonderful poem. The flow was great the and the rhyming was great also. The only problem I had was that I really didn't think that the poem was really sad, and I think that it lacked emotion. Don't get me wrong I really did enjoy reading it and I do think that it was wonderful; but, I think that it can be excellent with just a touch of emotion. I think that you have a very creative mind and that you are talented. I just think that you should open up more and put yourself into your work. Over-all 5/5. Keep writing!

Best wishes
Letty

P.S. I am truly sorry about taking so long to comment on your poems, but I have been really going through a tough time lately. Please forgive me!

I liked this.
My favourite part was the last stanza, and I thought the imagery was fantastic, although it did start to creep me out a little.