Comments : Now i know

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Ok great poem but again, grammer mistakes, 5/5 still and thanx for reading my poems

    this is how it should read

    Now I Know

    Now I know what true love is,
    something like a kiss.
    A feeling indescribable,
    something unimaginable.
    A rush of joy and happiness
    of passion and love.
    All these feelings in my heart,
    I will never let fall apart.
    I dont know what I'd do,
    if I had to live without you.
    So please stay in my life
    cause you know I love you too .

  • 17 years ago

    by damaris avila

    Thanks it means alot.
    (thanks for correcting me too =)