I think its great david, great flow, keep it up!!! 5/5!!!

the one and only Bryan,

Great poem, an original idea about love too. you turned love into a holiday parade, haha! excellent writing my friend. however, this poem could use some polishing up (a couple grammatical errors) 5/5

Aww David, how sweet! It shows how innocent love is when given to the right people! Beautiful job hun!

Ciaoxx

Awwwwww

Awwwwww that was sweeeet !!! She better not forget that saturday night either! Cos i'll kick her!! haha. no but seriously, i loved this!!
IMissYouLikeWoah. Lol!

Ttyssoooooon!!!!

-Liz aka Poetess