What a great poem, I felt like was in the moment. Good rythmn and flow.

I loved this, the imagery was amazing, beautifully written.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Awesome poem. I really like it please dont change it, it ia great the way it is. 5/5

Very detailed extravigant words nice job.

I loved you poem plz keep it the same always! i love it it reallly got me in the moment.
***Rory-Lena***

Well done that was really good:) keep up the good work:P xoxo