That is one of the most heart felt poems i have read. you describe that feeling of loss so well that i felt it while read. excelent technique and language. i gave u 5/5

OMG!!! Rachel that made me get all tearie eyed.Just thnking about john leaving in 6 mounths rips me apart , but knowing i have a friend like u makes things seem not so bad. love u forvever and thanks for the dedication. computer class sucks.