I know how it feels so be alone i can relate

very good poem

This is REALLY good. 5/5

"I'm left to drown in my world alone,
Left to die in these thoughts of my own.
The real world is but a fairytale to me,
Because this paranoia never lets me be."

^^ love it. the best stanza of the poem.

i feel the flow is lost at times, but the strong ending forgives everything. =)

thankyou so much for the comments on mine,
5/5
xxx

Wow, amazing, your not alone sweetie

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT VERY EMOTIONAL POEM GREAT JOB
SWEETY KEEP IT UP!!

Hey Willow

I Know you May Hate me and are angry at me

but i just wanted to say Ur Poems Amaze me .. Ur a Great Writer Keep It Up Ur Poems are Fantastic...

Mwah!! From Brooke xox

This is so powerful. few visual words, yet i saw it clearly.

excellent poem.
5/5
xxx