Outstanding work, I really loved this poem. I thought that it had a unique feel and was very original.

Been here hun it's hard too, keep up the good work and i like how you want back and said " i dont want to cry all my tears but i dont want to hold in all my pain" nice words keep it up

I loved it .. i really did and i related to every word .. good job.

Wow, excellent, and i can totally relate. good job. 5/5.
**lisa**

Amazing how depression can rob us of so much. I can relate to the I don't want to's in here.

I would recommend breaking it up a bit to make it easier for the reader's eyes. That is really the only thing I would suggest here.

--Sher

That was a very good poem you could feel the pain as you read it comment back love linda

Wow, i think these are alot of the contradicting thoughts people make...i never noticed that, this was very good. 5/5

Excellent and unique write 5/5