Comments : I dont want to

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Outstanding work, I really loved this poem. I thought that it had a unique feel and was very original.

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Been here hun it's hard too, keep up the good work and i like how you want back and said " i dont want to cry all my tears but i dont want to hold in all my pain" nice words keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    I loved it .. i really did and i related to every word .. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, excellent, and i can totally relate. good job. 5/5.
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Amazing how depression can rob us of so much. I can relate to the I don't want to's in here.

    I would recommend breaking it up a bit to make it easier for the reader's eyes. That is really the only thing I would suggest here.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    That was a very good poem you could feel the pain as you read it comment back love linda

  • 17 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Wow, i think these are alot of the contradicting thoughts people make...i never noticed that, this was very good. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Excellent and unique write 5/5