I like this "revelation" you had :)) and i love the poem :)) love your work Jen

I liked this poem. I think it's one of my faves.
And thankyou for the comment Jen on my recent one. It meant a lot.
Thats why i've been so quiet lately. Just had it all on my mind and being scared didn't help.
Sorry i didn't tell you but i didn't know how =(
5/5 for a brill poem
*Gem*

And then when you have to go,
the flames they go on burning,
they are never extinguished,
as i still have the thought of you returning.

I did like this stanza a lot. I think your rhythm was a bit messed up...but overall it was a nicely done poem. 4/5 Good job!
Charisma*

Hey I wrote a poem with the same title eh I like yours alot!