Omg wat a great poem i love it. so sad but very hard thought about. girl u got talent i jus hope u keep writing

I really like this poem. i can feel your emotion behind this, and thats really good. thanks for the comment btw!!!

~Spike (yes, i am a girl. just getting that out there, since ppl seem to think im a guy...)~

This was so sad....but beautifully written.
I think the line
''All the memories made just for them two''
would work better with All the memories made just for too''

And the line
''As she lie awake that night''
Should be ''As he lay awake that night''

other than that, I think you did a wonderful job.