Hey hunn. Good job. I can tell this came from the heart. You are a very talented writer. You keep it up because I am always looking forward to reading more. 5/5

>black&&blue

Ummm... i like this 5.5

Awww, hun. That was so good. Full of emotion. Love it. Keep it up! 5/5
God Bless

~*Tay*~

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Good one, as it shows emotion... you have done a great job.

As always, mindy..

amazing job ^.^
i read this soo many times.. but i can't get enough of it.

Haha i love it!!! so strong and bold, nice job girlie! 5/5

I enjoyed this one muchly, it's one of my favourites.
Again I liked the repetition used, and I liked the imagery a lot.

Ok. Freaky.
This is like exactly how I feel right now. I have a tendency now to shut people out of my life. Not exactly the greatest thing but so far it keeps my heart from getting broken.
This is by far my favorite poem of yours! =] Really liked the repetition that you had. Gave the poem that little extra effect.
Great job with this one, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow i can totally relate and i am sure many others as well feel the same way even though its a very common subject you make it your own great job!

laura