Comments : A SON OF A CRACKHEAD

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    This is soo dredfull, i am so so sorry, i too am a child of druggie adults, but i pretty much just say forget them, and get out of the house as much as possible, this is such a sad piece... i am extremely sorrowfull. my condolences...
    Marina

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    That was an awesome write. I sympathize your pain. The family of addicts experience more pain than I believe the addict ever would. It will be a lifetime of healing and I wish you the best.
    As for any constructive critiscism for your poem.... I would simply suggest using the spell check. Sometimes mis-spelled words can distract from the point of the write. There were only a few words that I found....safe and pasted which should have been save and passed. I believe you have alot of talent and I look forward to reading more from you.
    Dixie