Wow just wow this is a strong poem i like it sad but good...lol ur oems r greatly emproving not that they needed to^^lol well keep it up
love ya
zozo xoxoxo

Hey!! awesome poem poppet!! i loved it!! and thanx 4 commenting mine!! it means alot!!

While this is uneven and even gramatically challenged here and there, it is, most of all, a raw and powerful delivery of emotional Trutth......The last 10 or 12 lines had a drumbeat behind them......Your Soul has a rhythmic and melancholy voice here........
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Thanks for checking in, Huggy....I am good enough and, remarkably hectic but calm, right about Now..............Happy Holy Days......Blessed Holy Nights.....
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And yourself?

True u took this topic on pritty well... u made someone who could out toke anyone who steped up 2 the challenge quit tokin...well i guess im try'in 2 say powerful poem great job :)
Peace
Anthony