This was a very good piece i liked all of it keep it up

Aww it's adorable. I apologise yet again for the delay in the commenting of the poem. I got behind in my schedule with school studies and such that I didn't have much time for the computer.

But back to the poem. This poem was truly straight from the heart. It's wonderful. I loved it. It was adorable, yet depressing at the same time. I loved the flow to it. It was perfect, and didn't seem forced at all.

The vocabulary was astounding. I didn't even believe some of the words could actually fit into a poem whilst still being half decent. =P

The imagery was fantastic. I could really imagine what you were trying to paint in our heads. The word choice really helped along with the vocab a lot. It gave you a certain depth to the poem that very rarely comes along with good flow. =) Well done. xoxox

Samantha

Deep emothion felt within thewse words very well done