I wouldn't say this is really funny but it was very well-written and it did make me smile reminding me of the movie, and making me question why Disney allowed a smoking Caterpillar in their movie? LOL Nice write, !
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Hey that was good keep up the good work
^stephanie^haha very funny

Wow... Alice in wonderland... I hope... O.o Nicely penned. or whatev.. written. yeh.
I didn't really like the end... no offence. but I thought seen and been had diffrent sounds... maybe I' weird. ahwell.

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Thanks for commenting my poem about writers block much appreciated.
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I like this type of poem. I read them to my little one. I don't remember the
caterpillar smoking in the movie......bad Disney.......

Nice job!