Aweee. I feel like I'm gonna cry! I like this one a lot! I'm giving it a 5!

Heyy this is some good work. Keep it upp=), Read some of mine, But in mine the girl usally doesnt live. she usally dies. But yeah.
-Jessica-

Hey i rly like this poem its good. though in the end i dont think she should say " thank you you saved me..but i think she should say nothing but collapse in his arms..but dats my opinion. maybe u can come check mine out if you want .. i have looked at several of ur poems and i like them.