Ooooh. I loved this poem. I can relate to it so much. It made me wanna cry. =/ Lol. Just a suggestion though, you could fix the spelling a little...like instead of 'u'..."you"...and yeah all that stuff. I know to you it's probably nothing, but I used to do the same thing...and well to me...it actually makes a difference when you do that...it makes it more...poetic? lol. Idk. But I hope you can understand what I'm trying to say. Anyways yeah, great write. Keep it up!

-Liz.