Instead of crying with eyes and tears
She cries with puddles of blood.
There was so much on the kitchen floor
You'd swear there was a flood.
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That was the best part, it really put a visual in my head, ur a wonderful writer, and i cant' wait to read more!

I really enjoyed that poem so much, because I've felt the same so many times, and I just wish that I coudl talk to someone but alot of times, it's hard ya know? By the way, there is no newspaper article for that opem that I wrote, I made that up, none of that is true, even though I'm sure that is happens in every day life...

Thank you for your comments. It makes me feel good to know that someone is reading my work and actually enjoying it. I like all of yalls poems, too. I'll read them and comment on them.