Wow. Im so sorry for your sister she shouldn't be in this relationship. I know she should get out of it but she can't. She needs you right now to help her understand.

That is so tragic. ur poem made me cry. but i love how much u can feel the pain. very well done/

Hey,
you seem like an intersesting person, if you have msn, write a comment on another one of my poems and tell me. your an awesome writer.
xoxo Jasmine

Hey hunni, im sorry that you have to be part of this. its a really good poem and it really did make me think about a lot. its really easy flowing and you could just read on for ever x x take kare x x