This poem is amazing..can u read some of mine...like the ones in featured...they are my best i think..

Wow... I like the twist.

This hurts... but I like the story behind it :)

bye

Very nice poem, with a nice ironic twist at the end, however some of the rhyming sounds forced and it interrupts the flow a bit. A great read though.

Wow great poem i like the twist at the end

Wow, I really really like this one. It's my faviorate of all yours that I've read so far. Very, very well written.

Wow, this was awsum, really liked the suprise ending

Wow. I love this poem. It's great. ^_^

Awwwh, i really enjoyed this poem. It was really sad but i liked the flow and your use of rhmyes was great

Good Job

5/5

What a terrible ending to what could have been a wonderful one. Very powerful, 5/5. Em

This is amazingly sad......i hope it's not true