OMFG.. AWESOME!! Always have good poems...keep it up luv

KISSES
Ally

This is awesome! i love it!

Awesome xxx
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Amazing work i loved it

WOW im mean really Wow, this poem is so sad and it just snaps you in then gives a totally different ending. i really like this one keep it up.5/5

Haha that was unexpected. i was waiting for her to get killed or raped or something... but getting hit by a car fits too lol.

Nice poetry work. Iv been writin poems for like 5 years n I know a good poem when I read one n thats reallly good ;)

Wow this is really good it is full of emotion i really like it

Wow its make you think...
amazing poem
keep it up

Totally awesome poem!!
Nice Work!
=D

Now THIS is amazing :)

I like this, especially the first part (: A delightful read! 5/5

An amazing and very powerful piece. 5/5, Em