Ok. So I made a better one, like it?

Hope anyone can give me some pointers.

Your profile is so arrogant I don't want to give you any pointers. In addition, you are an awful poet. Don't kid yourself girl.

Hey girlii! thx for the comment!! this poem is good too! yea i was just in class lookin at the guy i like and i just kinda wrote a poem...but yea...well c/b if you wanna talk!
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Hey!! Thanks, Mandy.I'll take a look at your poems again. Seeya.

Thx for the comment!
i really like this poem. its like exactly like my luv life!! 5/5 from me!! <3333 it! keep up the good work!!

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Thanks. =3

My love life is like..curplunk. ><

This is soo sad... But I love it!