Hey awesome poem! i wish i coould write as well as u do! *jealous* lol!! keem em comin

If anyone will be her friend I know it will be you Chels!
Give her one of your pics to hang in her locker......no...no...no...bad idea. Then all the guys will be hanging around her locker.
OMG what am I saying, I am not helping any am I?

It is not a great feeling to be lonesome and friendless. And just by writing this, you have already showed the first step to friendship. And that is caring!
I am feeling that this poem could belong in the sad catagory because it sure is a touching write.

God bless Sweet Pea !

I think every girl in the world would be able to relate to this in some way or another.
It's a horrible situation to be in and i hope things will turn out ok.
Just wait til college, all the 'popular' girls go way down while all the others start going up in life. I speak from experience =)
Great poem!!
5/5
*Gem*

I feel bad for those left out too.. In fact, one girl was left out of a group her junior year and she wrote 3 bomb threats in our school in 2 weeks.. it was bad. I think people need to see everyone in another persons eyes

Oh. This poem kinda reminds me of my first week in secondary. I sat there, nobody spoke to me, I just wanted to be noticed by someone!
But I made friends and though I'll never be popular I now have 5 close friends and a great boyfriend! 5/5 For the poem- It rocks!

This is soooooo sad.....i'll be cory's friend, popular people are LAME!!!! lol but no really it's such a good poem, ur very talented!

Leah

I liked thos poem because I connected without, always feeling out of place like I didn't belong or wasn't included. Especially with the red hair. And hiding behind a camer ia perfect for a feeling lef tout of aview of life.

Hello i really like your poem but i was wondering how you got those hearts on your name because i wanted to do that.

Thats sooo sad and made even sadder by the song im listening too
but she does have a friend dosnt she
she has you??
mexxx

Great piece and every thing but did u get her permission to write about her like tht she might feel a bit imbaressed tht people around the word can read about her problems,but well good piece

Oh wow...this is so well written...i loved it

This strikes a little close to all of us at some point in our lives. You truly made me feel like I was a gawky teenager again going through the world and trying to find my niche. Kudos to you for a very emotion rendering piece. 5/5

Aw man that was really sad.. i think some people can relate to that one.. anyway u wrote it really good very touching.. will capture alot of peoples hearts i reckn. anyway keep it up. xx

Human nature can be so fickle can't it Chelly? I mean I couldn't really relate to this much, I was always in that popular group at school but being popular wasn't all it was made out to be. Looking back my highschool life probably would have been alot easier should I have been mroe selective about the people I associated with and made my own decisions about what mattered to be rather by being swayed by the popular influence...thats in retrospect of course, i didnt know then what I know now :o)
Your poem was beautifully written as always chels, with a deep meaning and great inspiration for the many young people out there who can relate to it.
Guess there's always another side to the story though which actually inspires me to write a new poem!!

Great job babes!