by diary Nov 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
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The summer sun shone just right against your eyes |
by DeepSoul
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It said a lot, but the flowing wasn't the best.. it wasn't bad, but yeah.. it just didn't roll off the tongue like some of your other poems, but it has emotion. good job with that! thanx for commenting on my poem |
by DeepSoul
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It said a lot, but the flowing wasn't the best.. it wasn't bad, but yeah.. it just didn't roll off the tongue like some of your other poems, but it has emotion. good job with that! thanx for commenting on my poem |