I really like this. Clever structure. Nice flow. My favorite part was

"Razor of light
Stars of mine
Grasp my heart
Never die"
Great imagery in this part. 5/5

Wow...I haven't read anything of yours in awhile...and yeah this is good...like the flow of it.

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

Is it me??

i am ur star :P

hehe.. sweet one again juls..

I should start writing back!!
but no one want to,so ill stay back! lol

keep it up friend of my dreams,
so far from my heart,
you keep walking inside,
those feeling I never wanted to have,
you took them away,
now its my time,
to be honest,
you are the greatest friend,
someone can have!!

i miss talking to u...

kly

I love it its beautiful poem