Thats realli gud. biblical tho, im atheist but i can totally understand where ya cumin from! 5/5, keep it up!
XOXO Freddie.

I love it all until the very last stanza but is is a good poem

Wow great poem. 5/5 but the last stanza could have been better. keep it up.

People have downvoted my lyrics "Hold On, Move Along" so I have deleted it and reposted it can you please leave your comment on it again and voted =]
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Awesome =] you're a really good writer. I wish i could write song lyrics! this is amaaazing. It really shows your love for your friends =]

thank you

Great poem!! flows very smoothly and is filled with lots of emotion!!
well done!!!!
5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace

You have a amazing talent for someome your age. Keep writing . Excellent job on your poem. Take care.

Oh wow...this was so sad, yet so beautifully written.
I really enjoyed this.

Wow this was deep, n god doesn't always help, he just watches us