Hey this is bobbi, i wanted you to know that i love this poem and it makes me think of me and my dad at times to... so i want a copy, to give to my father... thanks 8ter ur best friend Bobbi

I thought this was pretty good. my only suggestions are try to use stronger words than "junk" line 16. its a weak word and takes away a lot from the poem in my opinion. one weak word can bring a poem down a lot. same with your "what's with" in lines 18-19. its weak and is too much like common speech for my taste but thats just me. i don't think the "what's with" thing is that big of a deal though.

This is a beautiful poem expressing sheer love and affection to your daddy. It reflects how much you love your dad. Great write and very well penned. 5/5 all the way

With love
Fsams

Dear, what a beautiful dedication to your dad, well expression within beautiful emotions......i know how you feel dear, but sometimes life is like a cloud......btw keep writing, keep your smile whatever it may come....take care. Bert.

That's so sweet. I almost cried in the last stanza! It was so moving. It was really cool too coz I know that's how my dad feels about me-I'm his only daughter and ya know, it ain't exactly easy and I have 2 older brothers so he got used to them and had to adjust to the whole girl thing. lol well done!

This is an awsome poem i wish i could tell my dad that good jb 5/5
kasia

I really like this poem...i am a daddys girl...
i and i wish my dad would understand that i'm am also growing up

Awwwwww so adorable,words simple and precise.i enjoyed reading this piece.am sure your dad would smile whiles reading this

Wow, i wish everybody's dads understood that there little girl are growing up.
My big sister is going thourgh that phase right now.
But over all grat poem :)

Wow, i wish everybody's dads understood that there little girl are growing up.
My big sister is going thourgh that phase right now.
But overall grat poem :)