Don't let them go from you.

^^ This sounded weird to me, not sure why..

This was good too, still not as good as the first though. The flow was a little choppy but I think that is because of the short stanza's. I still think some of your wording could be improved. Some lines sounded very simple and had very common words in them. This just made it seem unoriginal. I liked the last line though 4/5

Great poem and very true. Keep up the great work. I only wish that it was a little longer. Other then that it is great the way it is:) 5/5