"But cry at end of day" is worded very awkwardly, but i'm sure it was just a typing error.

The rhyming sceme is simple but effective. This poem was really sad. I must say I can relate to the thought of loving someone even if they are using you. And that... even when you know that, you still stay with them. Heh, good write.

Aken Sol

WOW. This was absolutely wonderful. A very deep and beautiful piece. Especially loved these lines:

Attachment is a prison,
with pleasure for its pain;
These bonds I treasure slacken
and I tighten them again.
The reason for my sorrow
is the reason for my smile;
I'm bound up by your manner,
and I'm happy all the while.

This was trully an excellent job. Loved it, Loved it, Loved it!

Thanks for sharing
Jeannie