Wow....what a dark amazing write, it completely and passionately reminded me of an old lover just like that, you captured the old image perfectly. such passion, such lust, yet deep deep down, love. i love it. your a wonderful poet too, and thanks for the comment on mine, i can't wait to read more of your work and this is only the first i've looked at.
Weeping~

Woah! That's an amazing poem!
I love your talent!! A favourite in my books!! Love your work! Thankyou for commenting on my work!

Erally good
keep up the good work
5/5
me x x x

Great poem loved it keep up the good work