I love this poem. Excellent rhyming and all that but the concept was amazing* I loved your word usage. It was very meaningful.
Keep it up

Lisa,
I loved this poem,
I think I know what you mean by feeling something deeper. It touched me in a way I just can't explain. It's like umm...It's a good feeling I guess it's because I can related, but I loved it. I'm planning on going through & rating & commenting on your poems. =]] I love you, dollface.
-Heater

Stunning. Among your best