Comments : Until The Last Beat Of My Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Roula

    This was an awsome poem, I couldn't help but comment on it .... most of the time people dislike poems that don't rhyme, and they say that it doesn't touch their heart .... but I'll have to disagree with them after reading this poem .... It really touched me I got goose pumps especially the end it was very touching and deep .... you're awsome, keep writing :)