Children think their parents are alays around when they need them and they take them for granted.. I know cos i've done it myself.
Plus with everything goin on in a teenagers life, parents kind of take a back seat..
You used some lovely sounding memories in this piece.
Outstanding.
5/5
*Gem*

I think i know what you mean here & may be thats y this poem has very less votes coz very few people could understand, even i m scared of this part but someday all this might happen with me too & i wonder if i do the same with my parents too??? its all a circle, history repeats...right??

dont lose hope
keep writing!!

This was a very sad poem, my friend, it showed so much love, and emotion, your words really portrayed what was going on here, well done Cindy.
Love your dear friend Tara-Kay
xxxxx

Wow.. i wanted to read an older poem too see how you've improved.. and you have but you still this is an amazing poem to begin with.. you just keep getting better and better

Oh this has me in tears...
So sad...so beautiful..so tragic.
A beautifully written piece.

"I Try SO Hard"

i read through the entire thing that line stood out like crazy...whether it be intentional or a typo, the capitalization for the first "SO" just screams at me..screams...i love it, i think this is probably the best one ive seen from you - keep it up

Aww this brought a little tear. this is so sad to read that all your love to your son is not returne the way it should be. you have wrote a very powerful poem out of a very heart wrenching situation.

well done xx