Great poem keep up the good work

Aww thats so cute that you have someone like that and the poem is so good because it brings the title in at the end which is when it is all pulled together.
-Mo-MO

Hey the flow on this wasnt too great, but i love poems like this and you got the point across. maybe with a lil bit of work on the flow, it could be sumthin truly special! but good job on this anyways.

Yet another great poem by you. I loved it. Although you repeated the word "My" way too much. Try and cut back on that, and even change it up with other words. The flow was ok and the structure was good. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Cute poem..

this line, "And, new years resolutions are broken annually." disrupts the flow ... its about a sylabble or two too long

the first stanza was by far the best one of them all, it seems very real and simple ...

the last line was a dissapointment... you've done so well so far by staying away from the cliche subjects.. but that line was the poster phrase for cliche friendship poems...

i enjoyed the poem and by changing only one line it will increase greatly in excellence