Amen. life just sucks. u r good.

It's so deitaled of emotions. i like ur taste:)

Its vrey good i think i can feel your words speaking right to my heart!!! good job

Wow, i think this describes what i have been feeling lately, great!!

I love this good work!

I feel you on this one

So true so hard to forget bout you will eventually

I loved this, and I can defintely relate.
You have a lot of talent, I have enjoyed all of your poems that I have read so far.

Awww how sweet you know just because your mom is gone dont mean you have to forget about her i mean shes happy only because she went to heaven but you know she is looking at you right now and when you cry do you think that is what she wanted...no she wants you to be happy and move on... i know it is hard but just try well 5.5

I like this poem, its a good write! i love your work!

Narc xxx

In the morning I'll be alright,
But right now it's only cries.

When things like this happen.. nights always seem to get us the worst because thats when you start thinking about everything.. keep writing and I will keep reading haha 5/5

This is very sad its amazing how a broken heart can make a person feel.....its awful....
but we must all move on i guess because tomorrow is another day

laura

Regrets of things I've done,
Not to mention things I've said,
It used to be you and I as one,
But now just me instead.

that's my favorite verse
the others need a bit of work with their beat
4/5

This one seems so heartfelt. Really beautiful and sad at the same time. I just read all these poems of yours that were soaked love and this one dried it all up lol. Great write! 5/5

marcella

Aww
omg this is so sad
i feel like this alot so this poem really got to me
i loved it.
the flow was brilliant and your words mould together prefectly
great poem
much love .xx

Good poem