Comments : United

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I knew it from the start
    But you denied the emotion
    Now we stand united
    Connected by devotion"

    A very powerful ending stanza.
    I liked the whole concept of this poem, it was a refreshing read.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Agree with Gemma, a trully refreshing poem. Light and airy. Good Job.

    Happiness
    Jeannie