I really relate to the lonliness....I have felt this way alot. Look forward to reading more of your work

This is very well written. Hope to see more from you

Very beautiful

Very good write. awesome as always.

"Each time you leave,
You take a piece of me with you.
That part of my heart that makes me alive."

The opening stanza really got to me... It's just true in so many case
Lovely written poem
5/5
*Gem*

Well done.

This poem breathes sadness.....
You have a way of putting feeling in words that just hit the heart.
Its the loneliness that comes out....

another touching poem....

Each time you leave,
You take a piece of me with you.
That part of my heart that makes me alive.
Oh, I live still.
I must,
^^^
I really like this part.
The entire poem has unique sense to it which makes for a wonderfully interesting read.

I like to sometimes go to a poet/poetess first poems and read .... perhaps just for my own curiousity. I don't know .... lol ... but I like to read the poems the writer's have posted as their first .

A definite heart tugger this one is ...
Well done sweets, well done