Comments : My Letter

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Lots of emotion, very nice write.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    Oh my. This was short, but sweet. I could feel some of the feeling that you put into this piece. Wow. Just wow. Amazing flow, and every fit into place. I like this stanza the most:

    Lastly I would like to apologize,
    For not making it last yesterday.
    But if I saw you in that casket asleep,
    I wouldn't have anything to say.

    Breathtaking. I'm going to read it again. :]

    5.0/5.0
    Christina Hurley.

  • 15 years ago

    by norma

    Life seems unfair at times wouldnt you agree? if this was really a part of your past... then im proud of you for trying at a better life by leaving. i respect you the more you keep writing. very nice :]